Essay 1-4 "A memorable day in my life"

"Yokohama" is memorable place, because I had many memories there. I had lived in Tokyo for two years since I graduated from high school. I was a student in Tokyo. I had many memories there.
I met a girl in university. And I knew each other through a mutual friend. I was compatible with her. Since it, we had made contact with each other by mobile phone and e-mail. We got along with each other. Then I associated with her. My department was different from her department. So we met each other in lunch time , after school and , so on.
And we often went to many places such as Shibuya, Shinjyuku, Ikebukuro, so on in holiday. As she lived in Saitama, her house is very far from my house. After we always met Shinjyuku, we went to some places to play.
There is memorable place which we have ever gone. It is "Yokohama". Yokohama has "Minatomirai" and " Chukagai". And we oftenwent to "Yamasita Park" in Minatomirai in Yokohama. We can see a beautiful sea and " Bay Bridge" there. They wouldn't be better!! I talked with her about many things there. At that time, I really spent happy time there. And we went there many times.
but I left my university, because I thought it is not necessary to study in my department in this university. I specialised in Commerce. but I preferd to studying Commerce to studying English. Besides, returning to Kumamoto, I had to work in my house. I told her " I will return in Kumamoto". But she was able to accept what I said to her. After I persuaded her, she convinced it.
We met each other after I returned back in Kumamoto. She came in Kumamoto to meet me once every two months. and I went to tokyo too. When I went to meet her, we absolutely went to Yokohama. And seeing Yokohama Bay, we talked with each other in Yamasita Park.
However, it was difficult to meet each other, because it cost a lot of money to meet. And we could not meet soon when we want to meet. So we separeted.
Since then, I haven't contacted her. But I sometimes recall Yokohama. (367 words)